Wednesday, May 11, 2016

Journal question W 7.2

  1. So far i think that my WP2 is going fairly well, but i still have to work on adding more quotes and making my paragraphs flow better. I also think i should work on my structure a bit, but i don't really know. The reason i think is because i feel as though my essay could be a bit of a mess and although it might address one article at time, it could potentially be boring and jumping from one thing to the next way to fast

  1. Since i wasn’t here Monday, i was think whether or not the few quotes i had fit in well? I was also questioning whether i addressed all the part that were needed. I would have really liked to have gotten feedback on my topic and whether i was my writing about the three articles the way there were meant to be written for this essay. I would have also liked to have gotten feedback on where i should try to include quotes from the text because i had trouble finding said places this time around.

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